Yu
February passed. A brief summary.
Yu is strictly following the outline, the main plot hasn't strayed, and the storyline is clear, so there are no problems there.
The reason, when you get right down to it:
First, some readers don't like the alien planet storyline.
This book is over three million words long, and it's basically all about events happening on Earth. But from this volume onwards, the protagonist enters an alien planet, and the environment changes.
The switch in maps and the change in environment has caused some readers to feel unaccustomed. Furthermore, the entry point of the plot wasn't very good. It shouldn't have started with the "sweep" of the three northeastern provinces. It should have directly entered those powerful, unexplored regions, enriching the alien planet's species and world, while laying out all the necessary foreshadowing.
After Pi Shen accidentally enters the alien planet, he maintains his strong posture as always. With the upgrading of Star Techniques quality, these are inevitable products, so when some readers see Little Pi still wreaking havoc on the alien planet, they may feel a sense of disappointment, feeling that the imagined setbacks haven't arrived. Shouldn't the alien planet be more like...? Then again, the alien planet is indeed terrifying, but it also depends on who comes...
Jiang Xiao is obviously the kind of person who is a top student no matter where he is. He's not like that fake top student who's ranked second in a small county town high school class. He's a top student in a small county town high school, and he's also a top student at the Imperial Capital University...
Second, perhaps it's because, in the previous chapters, Yu concentrated on writing about upgrading Star Techniques within a few days. Some readers don't like chapters about upgrading Star Techniques quality, after all, the qualitative changes in most Star Techniques are in "Platinum" and "Diamond" quality. Advancing to Candle Moon quality doesn't bring qualitative change, only quantitative change.
This is easy to change, since... Star Techniques are mostly graduated already~
Third, Yu has been striving to maintain the style, trying to write in a relaxed and joyful way. I thought everyone would feel relaxed and happy reading it for fun, but some readers aren't satisfied.
There shouldn't be a problem with the protagonist's mischievousness. Readers have watched Jiu Xing Du Nai be mischievous all the way, after all, this is the only "main theme" of the book. Those who don't want to read it will just curse a few times and leave, and Yu is already used to it.
So, the problem must be with the companions.
The blind girl character isn't very likeable. You can see it from the data of the page nib. If Jiang Xiao's teammate was changed to Er Wei or Xia Yan at this time, it might be better.
That's how writing web novels is, readers give real-time feedback, and the author makes real-time improvements. Yu will try to correct the problems summarized above.
This book has reached 3.65 million words now, and it's already entered the late stage. I absolutely can't "lose my virtue in old age." Yu will concentrate even more, keep the string taut, persevere, write the late stage well, and, while ensuring the style remains unchanged, strive to improve the quality of the writing and finish the book well.
A book, there are highs and lows, stimulation and dullness.
Uh... how should I put it, Yu will adjust as soon as possible, thanks to the readers who still haven't abandoned me during the low period (scratching head).
?(′???`) Sending hearts
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So, three chapters tomorrow? ( ̄. ̄)